The Good Ship Marguerite L. and the Freighter D. Jack

My grandparents, Marguerite Louise (Kik) Kinney and D. Jack Kinney, were laid to rest many moon ago. Here's a little ditty I wrote in honor of their 70 years together. It's about two ships--the imperiled freighter D.Jack and a once fancy schmancy old ghost yacht the Marguerite L. The ships are named because my grandpa was a workaholic, like the mighty lake Michigan freighters.  And my grandma loved expensive things. And could have posed as a figurehead! 

It is ironic that in the poem, she saves him. Everyone always called Grampa the romantic Galahad, the rescuer, the savior all of which he was. Grandma appeared the frail lightweight but was in fact tough as a battle axe and 10x more incisive.

It is set in Lake Michigan, where my Grandpa and I swam and walked many miles over many years (while Grandma stayed home and read Architectural Digest). This poem is for my father D. Jack Kinney II, who knew all there was to know about the ships of Lake Michigan and who liked a good story.

The Good Ship Marguerite L.


stranglehold cold wind

mutes dull foghorn moan

banshee storm-ghoul's shriek

deafens warning groan


weakened lighthouse beam

struggling to sustain

snuffed in fog-clogged night

and vision-dimming rain


Embattled Freighter D. Jack

seeks safe, havening moor 

refuge from the storm

heads blindly toward shore


solid blank stare fog

lightless night darks drear

no moon marking rocks

sailors think all's clear


no fog gong foretells

dimmed lighthouse mocks

no death- knell warning

sailors off the rocks


beamless empty sky

deadly barrier ahead

ships smashed to bits

tale ends with all dead


blame the deafening blind fog 

curse the storm that rent the night 

sing of D. Jack's end and gloom 

blame the waning of the light


but tale's end is not yet writ

fate not sealed in lake tomb

sad's the song that ends too soon

ill's the wind that blows but doom


there is another verse to

this sorrowful rhyme

in the wings a heroine

is waiting for her line


within rock walls is calm

without tempest's brewin

bony schooner, Marguerite L.

sleeps moored in brooding ruin


by good fairy or bad sprite

Neptune's guide or Hades' shade

sends storm ripples into port 

rouses ghost ship to their aid


sleeping beauty wakes again

hears the S.O.S across the wave

though old, frail, falling apart

there are sailors she must save


with bump-booms, banging clangs

plays hornpipe on rusted chains

grind-jangle, rattle and clank

screams louder than the rains


by happy stroke of luck

or black magic rune

D. Jack harks danger

in her warning tune 


The rocks are avoided

The freighter finds a way

round the hidden breakers

ghost yacht has saved the day.


what genius loci possessed

Marguerite L. that night?

to rise up from death bed 

and take up the good fight?


sailor is a brother,

to seamen in all clime

Do some come back to warn 

just in the nick of time?

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