Bombazine becomes Electra


we interrupt this program 

to answer macabre bell

far-off summoning of

gothic mourning knell


Got myself bitten now

it's opened up a vein

psychotic butterfly 

crash-keening in my brain


of mourning and morning

and many hues of grey 

doves in pearl morning suits 

funereal iron dray


( don't even get me started on why it's "grey" as in "earl" and gray as in Eeyore. I don't know.)


death on little cat feet

or fog but either way,

it becomes Electra to go

round roulette wheel today 


got up in bombazine

counts jet rosary beads

corseted in her hatred

a thneed's what she needs


place your bet, milady

as the croupier tells his tale

watch now will the die turn

a snake-eyes shade of pale?


tough luck you lose, you

drank fizzy lifting drink

cocktail called "bitterness"

one part gin, one printer's ink 


chipped polish bitten nails

hands shaky from the booze

this is one creepy chick

who doth not like to lose


black lipstick stained tumbler 

hurled down on the floor 

You called for another yet

couldn't even find the door


well that's what you get 

for dicing with the dead

the wound-too-tight neurotic

who's about to lose her  head


the doom's come upon you

in your spiked Flavor-Aid

they slipped you a Mickey 

just to watch your gray fade


(here comes another of my famous sexy kazoo key changes) 


But wait, what's that I hear

an eleventh hour reprieve? 

comes the midnight special 

unless my ears deceive


Rise up sister and dance

puppeteer loosed your strings

Time to can-can like you can-can

shake loose grudge-holding wings


let the pigeon drive the bus

crack the mirror side to side

flip Rorschach psychedelic 

Play the acid punk B-side


Here we go, gonna get loud now...


So before you ask, what the actual just happened, I'll tell you. I don't know. I was clacking along down my reluctant gothic poem trail, when all of a sudden, Mother of Tarquin! Cue the sound the cartoon makes when it backs up and starts over. It's like a Polish dzu sound. With the z, j plus sh sound. Like bezsh-oop, plus the double take doy-yoy-yoy-yoing. Do. Not. Judge. 

That is what has happened to my poem. It has done a double take with about face. And as so often happens, the poor poet never saw it coming. Here was I just trying to write my psycho-delic verse, for once, without tying it up in any sensible ending. And speaking of accidents called art, I wanna do one of those urinal or paint drip works of art thingys that gets understood. When it's just a blasted bed pan!!  And if like Man Ray or Jackson Pollock it makes millions, well, all in a day's work. Anyways. 

(Evidently THAT's a word going by the spelling. I always thought it was just bad grammar.) So I wasn't even on board to go down the bloody goth route. I mean, look.. at..the.. picture AI made me. It's so Helen Mirren, Winchester--esque. ( I hate anything -esque.) And the "Rorschach" in the dew of the window. So dead common! Bangs head hard on desk, requests refill on the gin and ink. Even that sounds Seuss-esque!! 

But did I quibble when the muse-whatever called, nooo, Not I!! Needs must, I soldiered on. And we turned left. Again!! It's that damned pigeon's fault.






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