Sitting shiva by our lake


crickle camp fire crackles

from trickly drip mist bog

sip fine pine sap wine 

atop birchwood swamp log


wet wood smoky choky at

impromptu bonfire night 

midsummer daze-y haze

from rainbow flame light


translucent and transcending

tongues untied by the wine

ancient wisdom descending 

helped by fire, weed and vine


t'was ever thus, this ritual

immemorial riddles break

eternity's secrets told round 

primordial old growth lake


woods-wise elders saging

on life mysteries engaging

in papal enclave debating

acolytes attending on the aging


I was young by the lake

in paradise I called mine

I walked among giants once

upon a faraway long ago time


with an elder wise as a god 

nattering on freely we did 

never shushing  nor shaming 

keep mum was all he forbid 


demanding I ask my questions

treating them all with  gravitas

no matter how trite or common

only foolish was the unasked. 


unschooled yet wise past words

this trodder of untrodden way 

hoping my markings please him

because of him they have their say


he was more than Irish charm 

he'd charisma, gin and IT

with a splash of lemon pine

blarney with no bullshit


transparent where he could

opaque on his own pain

translucent when needs must

blurring bad with twilight rain



I've tried hard not to stray 

to printer's black ink rhyme

all it gets us is hurt by

my endless jitterbug with time. 


he passed so quietly it hurts

no footprints left by our sea

it's my job to share Opi's opus

to the jungling entrusted to me


I shall be the elder now

sitting shiva by our lake 

holding court with my littles

in a perfectly Granda wake


I love you Grampa-Opi Kinney. Moja droga ja ciÄ™ kocham. 

Rest in peace. 








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